And when he was about to bite me, I slowly pushed my hair away to reveal my neck.
Taken aback by what I did, he stepped-back a bit, and asked...
"Why, aren't you afraid of me?"
"What is there to be scared of?" I whispered.
I felt his cold lifeless hands on my neck feeling the blood running under my skin.
"because I'm a vampire and I might kill you".
I felt his lips on my neck but he wasn't sucking blood, he was kissing me. Little did he know I loved him and that I would cross the fires of hell just to make him happy.
He suddenly grabed my arms tight and softly whispered "I love you so much Lily and I will NEVER hurt you."
"I've always wanted to be with you." Tears slowly filled my eyes, without me even noticing it. "I want to be with you forever, Alic!"
I love you too, Alic! and I don't care if you're a vampire.
He brushed my tears away with his cold lips...
"Do you really want that?" he said while holding me closer to his heart.
"Yes I want to be with you whatever it takes", I answered.
A sudden burst of pain hit me, an undescribable pain that stunned my body. I then realized that it's coming from my neck, it felt like dying for a moment but then it it suddenly turned into an unusual high.
He stopped sucking...
He then slit his neck with a knife and pulled me to suck on his neck.
It only took five seconds but it felt like forever, I felt an even better high and then I fainted.
When I woke up I was on a beach. Alic was lying next to me, my head, comfortably resting upon his naked chest! It was a dark gloomy night, the most beautiful night that I've ever seen.
Alic noticed a boy running by the shoreline.
"Go feed!" he whispered, without a second thought I preyed on the boy and sucked his blood.
Once finished, I turned and found Alic right next to me.
He licked the side of my mouth and said, "you had blood on your lips!"
u did a very nice job u should write another!!! :)
Mar 22, 2011 Rating
wow by: Dolores
That story was amazing!!!!
Jan 28, 2011 Rating
love it! by: Anonymous
it was one of the best stories ive ever read so much passion! i truly loved it:)
Jan 17, 2011 Rating
hot & sexy by: Armand
Very nice story you should have added more passion on the seen of he turning her into a vampire!! direct to the point!! loved it!!! ✭✭✭✭✭
Jan 11, 2011 Rating
love it by: shadowQueen
I love this story:)
Jan 09, 2011 Rating
??? by: Anonymous
I liked it a lot, it kinda reminded me of twilight which is not a bad thing, I also love the ending, You should keep writing.
Dec 31, 2010 Rating
AWESOME by: Anonymous
OMG awesome story!!! I TOTALLY LOVED IT
Nov 12, 2010 Rating
awsome by: eternity
that was amazing. i was thinking of writing something like that too, but yours is so much better.
Oct 20, 2010 Rating
WOW by: Anonymous
really descriptive, same writing style as twilight. LOVED IT :)
Oct 03, 2010 Rating
Great!!! by: Georgia
Nice work. Your story was great all over. I really liked it!!!
Feb 15, 2010 Rating
Nice Vampire Story! by: Nikky
I like how you jumped right into it ;)
Jan 18, 2010 Rating
very cool by: Anonymous
very cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! utterly amazing loved it!
Dec 23, 2009 Rating
Great! by: zuruki
Great story! I write the same way too, good job.
Nov 06, 2009 Rating
A Midnight's Walk by: Anonymous
Your story was amazing!
:] but I would have started it a little different, maybe something like this:
"It was a dark and blistering cold nigt, but I couldn't tell you if i tried to.I was too busy being held by the most beautiful thing in the world! He was as pale as the moon we were walkin under, his midnight hair taselled to were it was messy but stylish..."
