BLOODED

by selena the moon
(antioch, california)

skin,
heart,
senses,
SOUL...

everything has changed,
ever since the blood is pumped through my veins.
i don't hunger anything
besides blood.
human blood is most favorable to me.

i wish not to be blooded.
i wish to stay human
or for a way to become human again.
but there is nothing i could do
what's done is done.

now i must roam the night...
the shadows...
the darkness...
for hope that someone can help me.
or...
KILL ME!!!

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Jul 18, 2010
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talented
by: Anonymous

I agree you did put lots of feeling and thought into. I could wish that i could be that good.

GREAT work!
Selena of Moon

Apr 26, 2010
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An extraordinary vampire poem!
by: Arianna,DeAngel

you really know how to capture a readers attention you add alot of feeling and thought into your writting. you should make a peom book i think it would be very intresting to read.

I would like to thank you kindly for writting me a comment on my peom, if you would give me pionters on how to fix some of my other works to make them more interesting that would be very...cool.
fair well.

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