Darkness

by Moses
(@ sea)

Shadow King

Darkness...

consumes you, fills your heart.
runs in your veins and seeps through your pores.

Darkness...

It comes from within you.

Darkness, darkness, darkness...

I am darkness, and I am inside you.

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May 01, 2010
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awesome
by: selena the moon

wow that is so amazing. Wen I read it, I felt the darkness starting to run through my veins and taking over my body. When I read it again, the darkness took over me. I actually felt like a vampire which, to me, is like the feeling of fear coming after you and you react without thinking.

Dec 07, 2009
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thank you
by: thank you

Thanks for the comment ill be adding more as I am more inspired daily by the online rpg I play. Reign of blood. You can look me up if you want I'm Deamon Whispers AKA Shadow King

Dec 06, 2009
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excellent
by: Vampiress

an excellent read, nice work..;..; V ;..;

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