Her eyes...

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Her eyes...

by Jackeline
(Las Vegas)




Her eyes were unfocused
Staring at the clear night with the full moon
Her body flexible but rapidly becoming stiff
Laying not as if fainted but dropped
As if she was an old doll no longer new
Wearing a black satin dress and shoes
Straight, long, jet-black hair
With bright red lips, slightly open
A long, graceful neck with puncture wounds

He smiled walking away, wiping the blood from his chin
"I'll be waiting for you, your highness*,..."
He continued to briskly walk away

Unnoticed, a finger twitched
Eyes focusing, she began to move
Slowly, and quietly
Shifting ever so slightly a gold necklace appeared
SARA*

*SARA means princess, that's who he was referring to with the 'your highness,...'.




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Apr 05, 2011
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Unique!
by: Anonymous

Wow, your poem... Was so unique and amazing. Please I beg of you to write more.

Feb 22, 2011
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The comment on the poem her eyes
by: Anonymous

I think that it was just pure genius and it was good... very good!

Sep 01, 2010
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Brilliant.
by: Anonymous B.N

You have an extrodanary way with words.
May I ask how you knew that SARA meant princess. Of coures it does come from Hebrew origins but I didn't think anyone knew what. You have a great vocabulary. Hope you write more.

B.N

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