I wondered if it was real as I stand in the dark and feel no pain but a spark, I can tell if you're near now because you have transformed me, into something deadly, but of great power.
I no longer fear death so it is no use to me now,I can tell you it's fine that I have no soul to your divine but it doesn't matter to me because you and I are together at last and forever.
Hello, I don't mean to sound rude or anything but I've been writing since i was like 13 and now I'm 14. I'm writing a book that has over 50 poems in it so far and I'm thinking of maybe sending it to a publisher some time. Maybe you could do that with your poem. I liked it alot.
May 17, 2010 Rating
hehe by: Anonymous
ur 14!! I thought u were older like
20 or 30 something!!
May 17, 2010 Rating
OK!!! by: Ramona
its okay and I understand that, I don't know what I was thinking when I made that title up. :)
;..;
May 01, 2010 Rating
mb by: selena the moon
O mb (my bad) i didnt know you were 12 yrs old. i thought you were older than dat. the reason why i thought you were older is because kids your age are not that interested in poetry. if like to write poetry, continue to practice cuz my poems took a lot of practice. trust me, it is sometimes difficult to be in a deep state and i get bored easily and im 14.
Apr 14, 2010 Rating
idc by: Ramona Moon
Well without the title do you think its good cuz I am a 12 year old and after i read it I realized it didn't make sense bt idc (i don't care).
Mar 06, 2010 Rating
letter by: selena the moon
I'm sorry if I offend you but it is more like your talking to your vampire lover, not writing a letter or a poem for that matter.
