Pristine

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Pristine

by Jesi
(Indiana)

The one whose blood is cold
is the one who draws it from others.
The one who is stronger than most
is the one for whom it is not a problem.
The beings that are thought to be nonexistent
are actually living among us.
and we don’t even realize it.
And I know,
because I was once with one.
And through that one,
I have become one:
Vampire.
The word holds so much in awe.
The eyes are captivated by the
painful beauty of the one who is undead.
The gravity of the angelic being
is almost too strong to resist.
And I know:
because I was drawn to him.
And he pulled me in,
and stole away my crimson life,
along with my heart.
I suffered in icy fire,
the pain too much to bear:
the pain of seeing him suffer.
He had partook of the one he loved,
severely changed her,
and turned her over to his side.
And there was no going back.
Ever.
And I know:
because I was the one.
I was turned into something beautiful on the outside,
but torn apart on the inside.
Just like his heart.
There’s no going back.

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Jun 14, 2010
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by: BleedingCitrus

This was absolutely amazing! It seemed so real to read it through your words...it's so simple to understand.

Mar 12, 2010
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Day-uuum!
by: DemonKandi

This is the most realistic poem I have ever read about a vampire. It all seemed so real to me when I read it. Who was he? Are you still his? I wish I could learn more about him...I think I have fallen in love with him through this!

Mar 06, 2010
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Dang
by: selena the moon

Wow that is amazing! It is like I could feel your pain even though I'm probably hundreds of miles away.

Mar 05, 2010
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W.O.W.
by: Flossie

When I first read this, I felt cold chills up and down my spine. When I read it again, I could sense a ring of truth to it. Hang in there!

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