Reborn

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Reborn

by Connie
(NC, USA)




Silently he takes me
And slowly lies me down
Lips on my neck
Increasing my pulse
He moves without a sound

I feel his teeth now
His bite is mixed with pain
The agony
Sweet agony
Let me feel you again

And now in turn
His blood I taste
Smells of copper
Warm to swallow
Not a drop to waste

Now for the awakening
From me my soul is torn
Seeing with new eyes
Senses strong inside
I am now reborn




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Jul 18, 2011
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Love It!
by: Sparrow Cruentum

If this poem were a cake I'd have it and eat it too, but since its just a beautiful poem I'll have to settle with reading it over and over again.

May 11, 2011
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Awesome Dude
by: Anonymous

It was awesome to let you know I'm a girl.

Mar 28, 2011
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Inspirational.
by: Annie

Wow. I your poem is amazing. It made me thought how much I wish I was madly in love with a vampire.

You inspired me to write my own poem describing how I feel and how I wish to be one.

To change from mortal to... Immortality.

Thank you. You made my day!

Mar 23, 2011
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Awesome
by: Elvia canales

I could fell the pain and agony if I just imagine it , if I was in agony I would be in lots of pain. but the point is you did a good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

;)

Dec 22, 2010
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Cool
by: Dannie Urban

I personally also like to write poems even if there not of this kind but i like yours, it's very interesting. You're a very good writer.

Dec 11, 2010
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I LOVE IT
by: kiki

i loved it. im not that good but you are the awesomest.keep writing more

Nov 11, 2010
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Love it!
by: Chezlo

i love this one, it reminds me of my life. lol keap writing poetry. ur really good at it (=^.^=)

Apr 15, 2010
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loved it...
by: SeaJay Davis

I loved it, I thought it was really good. You should keep righting more even if they are not about vampires.

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