The Stranger

by Arianna DeAngel
(Utah)

I look into the mirror every day, I see the horror in every way of this person in the mirror that will never go away.

I hate this person in my mirror I tell it to begone from my life.

Now, I see what I must do...

Destroy the mirror!

But as I smash the mirror and destroy it with my bare hands, the person starts to cry showing her blooded hands...

and I understand why.

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May 01, 2010
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pointers
by: selena the moon

by the way, you're a good writer you don't need pointers. if you still want some pointers, i guess i'll give some cuz i'm not a good writer. first, before you start writing, you got to feel what you're going to write about. like if you're writing about vampires, then think of the emotion the vampire feels. second, you could compare things with other things, as long as it makes sense. and third, the most important, DON'T LET RHYMES TRAP YOU. matter of fact, don't use them. trust me, on my first attempt to write a poem, it took me a year to write it and it didn't make sense. so again, don't let rhyming trap your creativity.

May 01, 2010
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awesome
by: selena the moon

you took one of the old vampire myths to whole new level. you also explained the death look a vampire has and how much they hate it.

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