Tree branches hit my face leaving cuts and bruises on my face. I didn’t care because I was running for my life as it was at stake.
Stopping for a while I tried to breathe. Gasping, I placed my hands on my knees, and bent down my head. I tried to take slow and steady breaths but I couldn’t. My heart pumped my blood at a mile a minute.
“I think I lost him. I think I lost him.” I said to myself out loud.
I looked up to see a bright light at the end of the path. I walked up the path a little bit and saw a house with the front pouch lights on.
I didn’t hear anyone behind me until I heard a twig snap...
Turning around quickly, I saw a dark figure. His eyes were the color of blood and his skin glowed with a pale white color.
I tried to scream but didn’t have the strength to because my breath was caught at the back of my throat.
He smiled gently and I saw his pointed teeth. They were so white that they glowed in the dark. His hair was covering his face, dark black, almost like midnight.
Before I can even gasp a breath, he grabbed me by the hair and jerked up to expose my throat to him.
I could smell his breath as he opened his mouth. It was a thick sour smell of old blood. I tried to push against him to break free but it was useless against him, I could barely move.
I felt a sharp pain slowly drilling my throat...
"If I’m going to die," I thought as my strength was being sucked out of me. "I’m going to die fighting." I pushed against him one last time and caught him off guard.
That mighty push loosened his grip of me, I bolted fast towards the house, not looking back but I screamed as loud as I can.
I was almost there when suddenly something hit the back of my head. I knew I was going to die as I felt the darkness gracefully swallowing me.
Waking up, I found myself in my room tucked up in my bed.
“Just a dream.” I murmured to myself, making myself feel better.
I walked out of bed and into the bathroom to wash my face off with cold water.
"Just a dream” I repeated, tracing a finger down my neck I felt two little puncture holes at the base of my throat.
Eyes widened, I looked at myself in the mirror. And said...
OMG!!! its really cool! Continue writing it is sooooo good! please! I want to know the rest!!!
Nov 17, 2010 Rating
totally awsome!!!! by: eternity
you should make a sequel . i want to know what happens next. i can only imagine!
Mar 11, 2010 Rating
I loved it!!! by: STORM
My friends and I really liked your story. Could you please make a sequel?
Oct 24, 2009 Rating
Wow by: Bella Cullen
I bet you've already read my story, but I couldn't help myself to my curiosity. When you woke up, what did you see? I want to know if you saw the same thing I did.