VAMPIRE'S FORBIDDEN LOVE

by Daimon
(Italy,venice)

oh velencea

what is this feeling?
why do I watch her?
longing for her to glance my way,
aching with the pain of wishing to hold her in my arms,
but why would she want to be with some one like me,
to her I am no more than a monster,a demon,satan's child.
She would much rather wait for her human prince who will sweep her off her feet and run into her tight embrace,and I she would run from disgusted by how inhuman I am because I am immortal,I am undead.
oh Velencea why can't you see I would never harm you or put you in danger
that is why I will let you have your human and I hope you are happy forever with him
I am doing this cause I love you.I know now what this is.
I feel it is forbidden love.

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Dec 06, 2011
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Deep
by: Anonymous

That is what vampire love is to let someone you love go.

Jul 18, 2011
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thank you
by: Anonymous

This poem reminds me of how the world really is. We can't always have who we love, and we can't be so selfish as to think so.

Jan 27, 2011
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WOW
by: Gypsy

i have read pomes and books about vampires i even wright alittle. but i love to wright pomes about vampire's, forbidden love, death, and lost loves and many more. your pome really reminded me of one i used to wright it was called dark love can't see the light. and your pome, well i will say is way better then mian and i look forword to reading more. well i you wright any more. which i'm sure you will.

Oct 21, 2010
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Amazing
by: Selena the Moon

You took the idea of forbidden love & made it your own. I like how you used the metaphor of a handsome prince sweeping the beautiful princess off her feet, it expresses how much the girl means to the speaker (or you, if it is in your point of view) & what it means for you to have her have a happy normal human life.
You also showed that being a vampire is like living with a curse because today's vampires never really wanted to be vampire so they suffer through the "curse."
well written.

Oct 14, 2010
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Beautiful
by: Belladonna R.

I found it very well written indeed, I love how you displayed that sorrow can be erected from love. Also, that true love means some times, to let go, and accept. I am sorry tho' if that did in fact happen to you.

Oct 04, 2010
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loved it
by: Faith Drown

It was so beautiful, and sad but it was a good Idea. Daimon Your probably a sensitive person and kind too, if you had forbidden love then you would'nt care, just saying

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